nag tangka alang nangawa
I see an apple
hanging from a pompous tree
my ladder is short (nin)
i reach an apple
with my hand and pull it down
to shine on my palm, desire (md)
adoring eyes lit
opening lips mumbling
you get kiss instead (md)
hmm can’t have this one
jewel in my loving eyes
cry not, watching you (md)
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November 27th, 2008 at 9:22 pm
forgot everything
straight to mall shopping
on her pajama
November 25th, 2008 at 5:14 am
driving home with ease
tapping fingers on dashboard
shoulder with the beat
November 22nd, 2008 at 10:02 pm
seven eleven
is as good for cheaper price
aroma sink in
November 21st, 2008 at 9:19 pm
driving with a sigh
looking for starbucks, close
thirst unbearable
November 20th, 2008 at 7:53 pm
succomb to teardrops
trembling hands giving liscense
a warning given
November 18th, 2008 at 4:12 pm
a little too fast
sirene stopping her car
she won’t be happy
November 16th, 2008 at 2:50 pm
coffee grounds, empty
grab the key to start car
looking for a drink
November 15th, 2008 at 7:39 pm
curses flew quickly
crunching trash can running cat
not a goodwake-up
November 15th, 2008 at 7:35 pm
an urge for coffee
hasten footsteps on floor
sound of dropping mug
November 4th, 2008 at 2:52 pm
wake from slumber
voice exchange beautiful
wiggling her toes
November 3rd, 2008 at 9:09 pm
slow dripping tears
soaking favorite pillow
then telephone rings
October 31st, 2008 at 3:04 pm
darkness conquers all
besides reminiscing mind
silently playing
October 30th, 2008 at 8:09 pm
so quiet no words
besides throbbing hearts’ murmur
then click of light switch
October 29th, 2008 at 9:21 pm
exciting moments
grasping body and soul
muffled moan tonight
October 29th, 2008 at 4:01 am
decided to write
too short but too meaningful
i understand
October 27th, 2008 at 5:09 pm
reminiscing night
full of sadness and delights
same teardrops falling
October 25th, 2008 at 8:48 pm
touching your letters
i am sensing your feelings
miss me so do i
October 24th, 2008 at 8:20 pm
remiscing love
muted whispers to pillow
tears flowing again
October 23rd, 2008 at 8:25 pm
loving parting glimpse
embedded deep in their hearts
will bloom to fruition
October 21st, 2008 at 8:06 pm
sweet glimpses
parting two lovers in need
craving hearts suddued
October 20th, 2008 at 6:33 pm
kiss away again
her daughter came bit early
there is tomorrow
October 19th, 2008 at 6:45 pm
somebody watching
with video camera
hidden in a van
October 18th, 2008 at 9:25 pm
footsteps leaving
split at the parking lot
a satisfied hearts
October 17th, 2008 at 7:43 am
soft whispers fading
clouds painting the milky way
shadows vanish quick
October 16th, 2008 at 6:56 pm
given peek, beauty
throbbing heart giving away
everything but soul
October 15th, 2008 at 5:35 am
sleepy eyes seen
a bobbing head, throwing greens
smiling darling
October 13th, 2008 at 8:44 pm
beats of crazy drum
shook her body and her mind
night’s drinks flowing
October 12th, 2008 at 8:45 pm
those gyrating hips
sparkling sequence hanging
like fireflies twinkling
October 10th, 2008 at 2:54 pm
they been there so long
rain came and gone, still there
i am here watching
October 9th, 2008 at 8:57 am
chuckling couple
beneath a giant palm tree
waiting for a ride
October 6th, 2008 at 4:19 pm
sharp pain on my ribs
soft whispers brushing my ears
holding her waist tight
October 3rd, 2008 at 1:33 pm
tickled giggling
clinging tightly on my arms
i touch her ear lobes
October 2nd, 2008 at 2:46 pm
warm breath on my ear
melting my inner soul quick
i have to kiss her
October 1st, 2008 at 4:48 pm
sound asleep dreaming
talking romantically
she hugs me so tight
September 28th, 2008 at 3:57 pm
she hugs me back
we are rocking all night long
watching the moonlight
September 25th, 2008 at 6:34 pm
moaning violin
sleep dreaming of a rain
while am hugging her
September 25th, 2008 at 6:31 pm
romancing giggles
crawls deep inside it tickles
craving her smile.
September 22nd, 2008 at 6:56 pm
darkness wins again
offered sweet dream early
i resist thinking
September 21st, 2008 at 4:44 pm
chasing my shadow
it gets so tiring today
lucky sun turns off
September 19th, 2008 at 6:43 pm
beak to beak so sweet
entwining mutual ritual
rubbing their body
September 17th, 2008 at 4:42 pm
buring candle light
taking me away from bed
i guess i am tired
September 15th, 2008 at 1:17 pm
beautiful body
coming out of a door
didn’t see her face
stcking out hips
barely clothe down caught my eyes
dancing with the beat
September 11th, 2008 at 6:58 pm
crack on an egg shell
a shiny beak protruding
open mouth and drooling
sunlight peeping through
silk embracing her body
nothing in between
September 10th, 2008 at 6:03 pm
thundering steps
quicker than bouncing ball
took two sets for win
hard surface kingship
delivers record winning
still has magic
US OPEN TENNIS
September 8th, 2008 at 3:33 pm
womens’ tennis end
victory fo serena
on top of tennis world
very imposing look
yet so gentle when she talks
awesome fate great one
english victorious
been long time before the war
this one happening
September 7th, 2008 at 6:43 pm
lefty save by rain
or extented suffering
think not about end
hard court king rejoice
un-usual victory scene
human after all
September 6th, 2008 at 3:23 pm
swirling wind inside
frustrated unsuspecting
home team victory
pumping her fist
roused crowd screaming so loud
i stand up too
jumping bumping chest
twin boys celebrating
men’s double triump
(US OPEN)
September 3rd, 2008 at 6:35 pm
controlled anger burst
with speed and agility
screaming audience
gasping for relief
called trainer, eat banana
outlast spaniard
(US OPEN)
September 3rd, 2008 at 3:31 am
very touchy name
tint of naughtiness reign
sweating with my pen
hair line crack on shell
sign of new life to prevail
above all flowers veil
blooming lotus pod
launching pad for jumpy frogs
giant carp waiting
September 2nd, 2008 at 2:29 am
wake up to dent car
message on windshield wiper
recording when called
much driving today
worth four fold having dinner
with my daughter
August 29th, 2008 at 7:15 pm
battle of lefties
consume crowd cheering so wild
still nuber one
(nadal)
what a gentle face
i can”t keep out from my sight
so sad she is gone
(ivanovic)
August 28th, 2008 at 6:41 pm
bouncing ball late night
grunts, tantrums, celebration
ads promotion
drops, cross court, smash
run, jump, chase that bouncing ball
to let go is fool
hide your injuries
find his weakness, take a chance
you could be lucky
(us open tennis)
August 27th, 2008 at 7:13 pm
blosoming minds came
spitting words of wisdom
always happy read
August 25th, 2008 at 8:09 pm
firecrackers on air
olympians screaming
welcoming a pause
bird’s nest remembered
records broken teardrops fall
so happy to watch
victory lingers
in our daily waking hours
we savor greatness
August 24th, 2008 at 8:03 pm
fast pace marathon
so many were left behind
wishing to finish
a perfect last dive
brings tears, cheers and victory
warm hugs from the crowd
(10meter olympic dive)
August 23rd, 2008 at 2:30 am
lake so calm, drying
waiting for rain to come soon
i could see fish fins
August 22nd, 2008 at 6:43 pm
baton drop on track again
unfortunate US team
there is tomorrow
diving like needle
tiny splash on water
china got ‘em all
August 22nd, 2008 at 8:38 am
migratings birds fly
ballet movements in sky
rushing energy
a sweeping darkness
put us to silent sleep
SONY smarter
August 18th, 2008 at 6:59 pm
inside water cube
there is a basket of gold
for victorious
oval in bird’s nest
bourne world’s fastest man alive
not from USA
saw you from the crowd
rocking, jumping like a frog
with banana pants
August 17th, 2008 at 7:14 pm
records are broken
in the city of beijing
usa rejoice
girl over forty
an incredible swimmer
a wonder woman
(dara torres)
is that michael phelps
mark spitz it’s time to rest
forget the protest
quiet in georgia
tanks are at stand still
they lost reverse gear
(russian n georgia)
August 16th, 2008 at 6:18 pm
and whispers came
in the mids of my sleep
i thought it’s a dream
wakes up slowly
i turn on tv; olympics
golden swimmer
beaten from start
sudden launch good for the first touch
protest didn’t change
August 15th, 2008 at 7:31 pm
and whispers die down
clamness cradle the moment
waiting to come
August 14th, 2008 at 5:56 pm
journey concert virginia beach, virginia
12 aug 08
thanks goddess of rain
for keeping clouds from pouring
cause we are rocking
when arnel screams
hello virginia pinoys
crowd roars like thunder
after listening
faithfully and open arms
i feel good again
any way you want it
wakes-up the whole neighborhood
cause we are singing
wheels in the sky
crowds exploded in frenzy
pinoys, everybody
August 13th, 2008 at 4:19 am
billowing smokes
running scared, explosions
georgia night
tonight is concert
will be there to rock my head
with screaming lads
(arnel pineda concert virginia beach, virginia)
goddess of raindrops
blow it to caroilinas
leave us rocking hard
August 11th, 2008 at 7:15 pm
boquet of flowers
handed to the victorious
US got the last
(US WR holder 100m x4 swim team)
wind dried lips speak
sleepy eyes start to weep
hungry soul alone
gentle feather float
chasing children with smile
don’t give up easy
August 10th, 2008 at 6:46 pm
humming melody
inviting me to sleep
close my eyes and dream
singing in the night
everybody listening
i remember you
olympians’ steps
on giant water color
recorded in time
beach beauties smile
catch president’s attention
photographer’s feast
georgia field
another grinding anger
russian bombing range
August 8th, 2008 at 3:37 pm
in and out of dream
segments so beautiful
phone keep on ringing
slumping in porch
waiting mail delivery
but it didn’t come
seductive affair
beneath the light of the moon
joint footsteps
beijing olympics
gold and glory pouring
sweating with desire
August 7th, 2008 at 6:59 pm
chirping up a tree
attempting to fly away
wings not so strong
stolen kisses
in a quiet office
her secret brimming
blooming love showing
blowing kisses, smiling
new fabrics, full hair
chuckling maiden
swaying hips to heaven
so happy talking
August 6th, 2008 at 6:59 pm
tall grass by the bay
dances with breeze from the sea
like hand waving high
feeling of relief
hugs my body the whole day
sleep right away
touching soft fabric
texture of a lovely hair
i remember you
August 5th, 2008 at 6:07 pm
golden grain flourish
in the valley of promise
hungry birds watching
mingling with stars
drunkened passion, short lived fame
after, walk empty
waiting for the rain
cracking ground, drying leaves, heat
my lips drying too
August 4th, 2008 at 7:01 pm
colliding rocks fused
formings peaks cooled by wind blows
frozen to snow
a lush wilderness
springkled with cute blossoms
refreshing to see
deep yellow river
boiling with high speed
silting the rice farm
August 3rd, 2008 at 8:12 pm
teasing voices heared
yearning to listen again
waiting patiently
luaghter in the rain
muffled by thunder roaring
i see their smile
sweet voices i know
wanting to crawl within
tickled and chuckling
August 2nd, 2008 at 8:06 pm
flashing red, dashboard
engine trouble on the road
turn on hazard light
flashing i could see
am restrain on barber chair
i press the button
i sense sadness flow
tears lining your eyelids, dripping
i wish i could touch
July 31st, 2008 at 7:02 pm
waiting for your call
i fall asleep pretty doll
dreaming your smile
sweating under the sun
sky so clear and far beyond
working for dollar
gentle voice i hear
happy, i could sense it clear
have a nice day, dear
July 30th, 2008 at 6:56 pm
sitting on his car
letting time pass by, daily
he is a homeless
sailing ship at sea
lost in the thunderstorm
showed at foggy bay
July 29th, 2008 at 7:12 pm
walking on wet grass
on bright, calm, early morning
tickling my feet
walking aimlessly
clad in black dress, painted face
looking so pretty
July 28th, 2008 at 7:59 pm
smiling faces
converging on one corner
dancing with the beat
rumbling rockers sing
along the street rocking
people screaming
July 27th, 2008 at 5:02 pm
tensing muscles sweat
downforce thrust pushing speed
two wheels in tandem
(tour d france)
castle in hollow
retreat of vicious warriors
of long time ago
tired body on rest
cooled by fluttering breeze
soothing panacea
heart full of loving
can’t pick the one deserving
agonize in pain
July 27th, 2008 at 3:30 am
forgotten boat rest
rusting to the time passing
wasting everyday
noisy edger cut
exposing shiny stones
morning honey do
July 27th, 2008 at 3:26 am
swaying ladder ride
against the wall outside
hammering loose ends
July 26th, 2008 at 8:58 pm
from vantage point
enjoying passing moments
reminiscing thought
beautiful legs
pass me by, i roar and sigh
respond with smile
July 26th, 2008 at 8:50 pm
tata natutuhan ko ‘to sa isa nating
manunulat si kagalanggalang
bongcaran, nag-iinsayu lang ako
para mahasa.kung minsan tama ang
bilang pero walang lasa kung puwede
lang sanang lagyan ng patis o iyong
sauce ni mang tomas. mahirap sa tagalog kasi
maraming bigkas ang salita natin o mahirap
iyangkop sa bilangan(5/7/5 sana 6/8/6 kasi pinoy tayo
o 8/9/8 ang bigkaso otso/otso/otso o soot soot soot)
July 22nd, 2008 at 5:09 pm
Di ko alam ang Haikung
Tulain ninyo,
P’wede ba ‘kong matuto?
Tula nang tula!
Tata
July 20th, 2008 at 8:01 pm
sleeping beauty
did not hear the phone ringing
missed appointment
she is excited
forgot to sign score card
disqualified (michelle wei)
shark showing his teeth
on english greens, yesterday
wind like waves for him
(greg norman british open)
afghans supermen
nobody got hurt in clashed
yanks suffer most
(recent firefight on outskirt of pakistan)
straining pedal
left behind on uphill climb
too tired for today
(mark cavendish tour d france)
weakening peso
more visitors come to spend
time for you to send
(yes send money to your kins)
July 19th, 2008 at 7:59 pm
hawk flying overhead
searching, listening to prey
little critters run
sun is up again
watching, carressing terrain
guiding the earthlings
walking with a limp
patiently wearing high heels
beauty still there
July 18th, 2008 at 6:57 pm
falling gentle tears
blown by the wind through window
car going faster
loud roaring thunder
no sign of rain nor lightning
but trailing smoke
July 17th, 2008 at 7:28 pm
swift roaring tide come
bubbling, washing away
footprints on the sand
dashboard flashing light
my car did sudden stop
scary moment
July 16th, 2008 at 4:17 pm
walking on a roof
one sunny afternoon, fun
i see far away
sweet halohalo
ice cream slowly melting
a cherry sinking
sticky rice cake
very delicious, looks great
cheaper to buy it
pretty, smiling
pointing dishes of choice
she knows what i want
July 15th, 2008 at 7:10 pm
searing lightning burst
split a tree and tumble down
started a fire
darkness, pouring rain
flash flood roaring on street
people are waiting
flowing mudslide
tumbling tree stumps stock
clogging the culvert
July 14th, 2008 at 7:25 pm
pearly white showing
face glowing, ribbon blowing
paula creamer win (lpga)
balls wanted to swim
besides one decided to stay
champion name perry(pga)
bike flying downhill
chase group with equal skill
rocco never fail( tour de france)
kyle with toyota
can’t catch ‘em on the oval
caught by grassy mud (nascar chicago)
July 13th, 2008 at 7:42 pm
colorful salad
with biting taste of pepper
hungry and sweating
wide open brown eyes
with cute eyelashes, smile
it feels good to see
July 12th, 2008 at 2:53 pm
dancing leaves above
keep dragonfly from landing
me, enjoying flight
thick grass by bunker
swallowed my ball and my feet
i could have lay-up
floating black turtle
looking at me with pity
smile wrap my lips
fading sweet voices
lingering, reminding past
i pause for a sigh
July 11th, 2008 at 8:05 pm
crystal river flow
trout swimming upstream
rainbow shadow show
shiny polished stones
neatly wrapped in zip lock bag
good gift for christmas
sparkling little pearl
gracefully adorn her neck
i keep on watching
July 10th, 2008 at 12:24 pm
slowly melting
before my eyes, i am cold
but my breath, steaming
lime green bud’s beauty
i savor with passing time
i left it to bloom
moistened ground, fern grow
green moss keep them together
like love i do know
July 9th, 2008 at 6:35 pm
smoky summer
giving us teary eyes
killing mosquitos
singing cardinal
so beautiful hard to find
straining my eyes
snake up a tree
coiling on branches with glee
busy bees don’t mind
screaming woman
waving at taxi driver
everybody staring
July 7th, 2008 at 6:55 pm
bouncing grass ball, fast
captured crowd’s breath and went wild
rafa king of grass
sister’s rivalry
sizzle on grass court, awesome
doubters forgotten
high heels knocking loud
sexy lady, swift stride
curvy legs on sight
cute umbrella
crampled helplessly by wind
ended in trash bin
July 6th, 2008 at 7:47 pm
waiting patiently
beneath the smiling moon
rewarded by kiss
blooming to sunshine
sparkling dew so neat
petals always fresh
beautiful capri
hugging curves to surrender
can’t stop looking
twinkling eyes
hidden while lips having feast
it will be a while
July 5th, 2008 at 7:55 pm
powerful punch
connected, demolished face
pinoys are happy
gambling debts unpaid
mounting to extreme, helpless
hiding in the crowd
hungry stomach
roaring and hurting again
pretending calmly
July 2nd, 2008 at 5:11 pm
ball strike a tree
bounce, landed on the fairway
lucky, i’m at ease
rippling water
just swallowed my last ball
one of those journey
rattling voices
tale of many near misses
i sit quietly
July 1st, 2008 at 7:10 pm
an old rocking chair
still rocking in the dark
when the wind blowing
a dripping dew
attracted wandering ants
in circular form
a barking puppy
tail waggling joyfully
gets hugs and a kiss
June 30th, 2008 at 7:26 pm
chip from bunker
drove gallery in frenzy
won the tournament
raindrops from sky
red flag flying, pit crew shaking
rain man won the race
dribbling on net
and gentle kiss does magic
but not for second time
June 29th, 2008 at 8:15 pm
a clear blue sky
watching blooming flowers
tempted to shower
crystal clear river
transparent shrimp, except eyes
i can see heart beats
June 29th, 2008 at 11:33 am
cold coconut juice
start sweating on my hand
silent temptress
fresh chop onions
on fried fish and tomato
salivating lips
June 28th, 2008 at 7:12 pm
red sun up above
sending chills to my spine
as darkness abound
thick smoke in air
birds hopping on the street
escaping choking
fog in summer day
brings tears and coughing for me
indoors not helping
June 25th, 2008 at 7:20 pm
revealing attire
summer blooms walking beauty
curves showing freely
dark glasses shining
hiding weary looking eyes
let me try wearing
rocking music loud
rising blood pressure normal
pretending singing
broken hearted kins
wait patiently but no luck
bless them forever
June 24th, 2008 at 7:03 pm
big brown king crab legs
hanging over her small plate
too busy to see
red city buffet
people leaving with smile
i could understand
beautiful dress
came with smile and a check
it could be the tip
June 23rd, 2008 at 3:19 pm
late for a minute
rushing through narrow street
stop by police
a sleepless night
busy fingertips tapping
melody of dawn
June 21st, 2008 at 9:02 pm
sword rest for season
wounded knees will heal again
to conquer the green
the wheels from paris
will start rolling again
no yank contender
celtics so prevail
next year could be west to shine
get center grinder
June 17th, 2008 at 7:16 pm
last roar came not far
screaming fans full of joy
me too so happy
mighty sticks rest
rolling rocks seems to stop too
joining champion
hurt knees forgotten
at triumphant hole seven
nerves has prevail
June 16th, 2008 at 7:07 pm
thundering screams
floods the valley of jolla
tiger is roaring
roco is but quits
knows who’s coming tomorrow
but nothing to lose
June 14th, 2008 at 6:16 pm
breeze in la jolla
driven balls to waiting cliff
phil wasn’t spared
roar of the tiger
heard clearly, yes at pin high
i feel like playing
June 12th, 2008 at 6:49 pm
rocky mountain top
kissing beautiful clouds
begging to stay
lovely tomato
coming from corporate farm
sick after eating
June 11th, 2008 at 6:54 pm
flash in the sky
lit up the whole neighborhood
children screaming
thunder from the clouds
roaring with anger again
i pretend deaf
oh! mumbling lips
wanted to be understood
but nobody heard
June 10th, 2008 at 8:55 am
beautiful house
overlooking the river
pretty girl’s home
paddling kayak
down stream, passing boulder
disappeared under
swimming trout
watching dragon fly keenly
caught by hungry bear
June 2nd, 2008 at 2:41 am
swaying flowers
pollen flying all over
my eyes in tears
sun getting so hot
my sweat is soaking my shirt
i am so thirsty
chilled water bottle
soothing, i rub on my neck
much needed relief
May 30th, 2008 at 11:52 am
chirping up the tree
caring young while mom away
nest in harmony
open beaks for food
reaching up the sky waiting
darkness came no mom
silence blankets nights
huddled like coconut fruits
fall asleep hungry
May 26th, 2008 at 6:17 pm
undulating green
it’s hard to read putting path
missed by inch with sigh
hit the bunker lip
bounce to soft slanted green
settles on the fringe
fading hits a tree
rolled in the yard, scared dog
three dollars wasted
ball on clear water
i am reaching carefully
honey! towel please
May 25th, 2008 at 7:55 pm
snake wrap around
too full to look far beyond
ignored me, relieve
sharp thorn on bushes
lodge on my skin it hurts
bare for good stroke
a joyous foursome
on back nine struggling
but laughter abound
crack on tree branches
hampered a forward progress
sigh miserably
still pond so close
to the pin collects them all
mine no exception
..anybody of you play golf or tennis?
May 22nd, 2008 at 6:50 pm
hissing wind beyond
getting closer to me
worried what could be
raindrops falling now
ducks, geese doesn’t mind at all
break out umbrella
zooming provI ball
hits bunker roll down river
turtle startle
drop to continue
penalty stroke, a must
i will be careful
May 21st, 2008 at 7:07 pm
hissing wind and raindrops
through trees, houses, roads and weeds
flooding on street
broken branches lay
birds terrified shivering
leaves scattering
tiktak of icefalls
roaring, scratching window
broken diamonds
May 20th, 2008 at 3:59 pm
beef, shrimp, vegetable
mix over hot plate with sauce
monggolian food
skinny chopstick
fumblin in my finger
pick shrimp tomy lips
giggling waitress
brought fortune cookies to me
grin respectfully
filled, enjoyed the day
a generous tip offered
smiled, bid goodbye
May 19th, 2008 at 6:56 pm
rolling provI ball
hit pine cone bounce into sand
egg yolk not pretty
wedge scooping sand
good out, game has just begun
two stroke to green
ping a distinct sound
swoosh airborne path to green
short, do it again
chip, soft landing roll
settling few feet to go
gentle roll to hole
hay! tapos din/played good 2d
May 17th, 2008 at 3:55 pm
a whispering breeze
blowing gently across lawn
flowers dancing with …
japanese beetle
chewing myrtle fallen leaves
pop by passing tire
May 16th, 2008 at 6:58 pm
dragon fly asleep
hanging on beautiful leaf
catch ‘em by the tail
young wings fluttering
she is biting my finger
let her fly away
up in the sky
gliding still wings holding
lost into the clouds
hmmmm…. sayang diko napic
May 10th, 2008 at 8:35 pm
whispering turtle
by the banks tighly huddled
dog bark stumble
wiggling carp fins
stirring river surface
rippling the shore
May 7th, 2008 at 4:36 am
yellow tomatoe
sparkles to gazing sun
fade, harvesting hand
branch lifting high
showing hidden lovely fruit
surprise, smiling face
May 6th, 2008 at 6:52 pm
giggles beyond door
humming, cutting the shrub
all quiet bird flew
ticking mystic keys
traveling beyond window
parted lips drooling
kid pedaling fast
run over nieghbor’s rosebed
petals on the ground
angry lady weep
pick fallen petals with sigh
nieghbor came and cry
April 26th, 2008 at 10:45 am
juicy orange fruit
sparkling delicious rind
bursting in your lips
thirsty craving lips
kissing fresh harvest grapes
gentle eyes watching
yellow banana
drooping, soaking on the rain
tree frog in hiding
sweeping clouds, clear sky
birds flying chasing prey
hides beneath the tree
hmmm…puwede kaya mga ito.
April 22nd, 2008 at 2:44 pm
hmmm.. i tried researching, don’t lose
hope i’ll write one soon … arigato kudaimas.
April 19th, 2008 at 12:48 pm
then try…we’ll see…(smiling here)
April 18th, 2008 at 4:28 pm
thank you nin san, oh! that would be nice
to do given a chance.
April 18th, 2008 at 12:12 pm
your haiku’s are fine. practice makes perfect and this forum is the most forgiving welcoming place so keep them coming. gee, are you planning to write in jpnse too:-)
April 10th, 2008 at 2:56 pm
would i say thank you
adoration you bestow
coz i cry reading
i just write a few
beautiful scribbles hue
don’t tell i’m keeping
yaay.. i hope i didn’t cross
the gray line of haiku.
arigato kudaimas. kinkides.
(thank you, beautiful)md
April 10th, 2008 at 2:28 pm
my good friend, this is so sweet. thanks so much. a subject as simple as apple can draw different variations and interpretations. the apple here is my poetry production. you don’t and won’t have this problem; you’re one of those gifted ones that can whip a sonnet in 5 minutes. thanks again.