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Haikus

by Ao-Suzume

1.) Awake

Listen! the humming,
the buzzing and the chirping,
nature is awake.

2.) Pond

Raw flakes swiftly tossed,
Slow in the pond they wiggle,
the goldfish I feed.

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5 Responses to “Haikus”

1. Willie Bongcaron says:
   March 4th, 2008 at 12:25 pm

   Ernie,

   Thank you for the comment.

   Willie

2. Ernesto Santiago says:
   March 3rd, 2008 at 11:46 pm

   Great write, I enjoyed the read!

   Here’s mine in a free form haiku.

   morning dew
   the subtle sigh
   of a rose

   Cheers,
   Ernesto

   p.s.

   haiku and not haikus(?) for singular/plural form.

3. Willie Bongcaron says:
   March 2nd, 2008 at 12:08 pm

   Did I say Martha? Sorry… I mean Ruth. Thanks again

4. Willie Bongcaron says:
   March 2nd, 2008 at 12:07 pm

   Thank you Martha!

   Nothing is more fitting a comment than a haiku that says what the writer feels.
   Again, thank you and best regards.

   Willie Bongcaron

5. Ruthmarie Wartha says:
   February 27th, 2008 at 1:42 pm

   Ignited by spark
   A glowing light in the dark
   Luring, torrid, stark

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